I wrote something recently and as always, ran it by my editor (Mr. Brutalism) for his assessment.
He was fine with it except for the last line, which he felt was veering into the "cheap laugh" category by using profanity.
When I responded that I thought it was not too far over the line and effectively got the laugh, he replied, "What's next? Smashing watermelons?"
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